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This was it; the day they've all been waiting for. As a young girl who had just turned 19, I had envisioned my wedding to be on a beach with lots of decoration, twinkled lights and pearls on my wrist. I’d imagined it happening right after sunset where visible light rays could add meaningful glows to an already memorable occasion. Yes! That’s my dream. I don’t need much crowd to achieve this… just family and a few friends would do. But that’s a dream for a 25 year old; I’m just 19 and damn I’m in love this guy called David – the guy I willingly gave my virginity. He is just 21 and we are about to get married. What life would we live?

My father was a deacon, well respected in Church. He took me as his pride; the very apple of his lovely eyes. I didn’t stand a chance of making any mistake.

"You just have to be perfect," he often tells me like I was an angel without blemish.

Dating any guy was out of the picture. I would squat all night long if he dare catch me standing, talk less of even talking to any boy. But it wasn't my fault anyway; there was little I could do to stop them from chasing me. I’m extremely pretty with a sweet-tiny voice that commands a lot of attention. Each time I sang at Church, I would have to ran home as soon as services comes to a close before dad sees any of those guys asking for my number.


How then did David come into the equation? This guy was simply too handsome, with an equally melodious voice that often made me insist that he takes solo in our Choir group. I began to crush on him right from the moment he saved me from falling off stage during Christmas Carroll. He was very gentle; even my dad loved him. So it wasn’t an issue at all when dad noticed we became friends.

His sacrificial nature is second to none. Somehow, he stuck to my side. And when he asked me out, I didn’t hesitate for one second; I agreed immediately. There was nothing to think about! Before long, we began to play the lovers version of hide and seek. We dated secretly for five months. I had my first kiss on my nineteenth birthday and I felt I was ready… ready to give him everything.

I invited him home for the first time when mum and dad had gone for their normal Church meetings. I had no idea he was a virgin too. We embarked on that painful-blissful journey, but to my hard luck, my parents caught us unclad. It was one hell of a moment for me, but I didn't care. It was decided then: dad would not tolerate immortality in his house. We have to get married.

Now I stand, staring at the mirror in my wedding dress. David had pleaded earlier with me to give in, but I know we still have a lot to accomplish in life. So I ran away, leaving him stranded at the altar. I have to rediscover my life again, somewhere far away. My name is Oluwatoke Bisola, and this is my story.

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Comments (30)

Country Talesposted on 2nd Jun 2018 08:40:37

@Pamela... It's war indeed

pamelaposted on 1st Jun 2018 16:30:30

Oh! My God bukky Wat will u do now hmm Dis is war😑😁

Kofi Elikemposted on 1st Jun 2018 08:56:33

Me too... @Pam

pamelaposted on 31st May 2018 16:42:58

Awww I pray madam Clara doesn't die

Country Talesposted on 29th May 2018 08:27:09

@Pamela @Kofi... We published episode 19 this morning.

Kofi Elikemposted on 29th May 2018 08:25:51

@Pamela... You've got company. I'm waiting for episode 19 too

pamelaposted on 28th May 2018 22:52:21

Oh my God I can't wait for bukky to teach vodka a lesson she will never forget and also, for jeremy I say a shame on him please I'm waiting for the episode 19

Country Talesposted on 22nd May 2018 18:13:09

@Pamela... The author will be happy to read your comment. We will post the next episode this evening

pamelaposted on 22nd May 2018 15:17:22

OMG this story is so nice and can't wait to read next episode

Country Talesposted on 16th May 2018 14:13:16

@Pamela... Episode 9 has already been published.

pamelaposted on 16th May 2018 09:06:57

I will really love to read the episode 9,i can't wait

Kofi Elikemposted on 7th May 2018 08:43:47

@Pamela... Me too

pamelaposted on 5th May 2018 22:26:15

I love this episode and can't wait for the next episode 😘

Matthewposted on 24th Apr 2018 13:29:32

Bukky is going through a lot. I hope she makes it quick

pamelaposted on 24th Apr 2018 12:13:57

I love this episode but I pray she makes it in life and make that Lizzy clean her shoes

Kofi Elikemposted on 19th Apr 2018 08:51:22

@Pamela... True talk

pamelaposted on 18th Apr 2018 21:43:36

That is a nice one

Ashwani Kumarposted on 12th Apr 2018 01:21:23

When u know something give me a ans of emotions moral story 108-150 words in a day or two..... focusing moral support story.. comments are must so plz...

pamela Adusei-pokuposted on 11th Apr 2018 16:52:00

Yes please

pamela Adusei-pokuposted on 11th Apr 2018 16:50:57

Please am waiting for the episode 4

Kofiposted on 10th Apr 2018 16:21:11

@Pamela... you mean episode 4 right?

pamela Adusei-pokuposted on 10th Apr 2018 10:54:48

please am waiting for the episode 3

Leenah Leanaposted on 8th Apr 2018 01:45:48

My blood is boiling and I just can't wait to read more 😍

salawu moses oluwaseunposted on 6th Apr 2018 07:04:07

can't wait for the whole story.

Cassandra Lenanaposted on 21st Mar 2018 13:29:34

Bring it on,,,,,

Country Talesposted on 20th Mar 2018 19:46:07

@Delali... We will publish the next episode on Thursday

James Delaliposted on 20th Mar 2018 16:22:38

Woooow, this's interesting. Can't wait for the next episode!!!! Pls when are we expecting it ????

Jamdiposted on 18th Mar 2018 14:45:27

I Can't wait to read this

Aminaposted on 14th Mar 2018 11:38:32

I'm waiting for the next episodes

Kofiposted on 14th Mar 2018 09:08:05

Wow... The intro has caught my attention a;ready. I can't wait to read the complete story

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